The poor little coathanger

Oh the poor little coathanger... All he wanted was a coat!!

The little coat hanger hung in the cupboard,

Like all good coat hangers should,

Collecting dust and bits of fluff,

feeling sadly sorry for itself.

 

It was made out of some wire,

then hung on a bit of thread,

dangling from the iron bar,

in the small cupboard like shed.

 

It smelt of red and all things green,

and everything else in between,

and on its bent, triangle shape,

the mites gathered like sheep.

 

There was no sign of a shirt,

or even a coat, a top, a blazer

And the little coat hanger hung forever more,

imagining a dream like splendor.

Author's Note

This is just for the pure fun of being random. It's for fun. It doesnt make much sence and is wonderfully random :)
I'm also only 13 :D

Reviews

[Autumn Alvira]

cool

[Helena]

Fanastic! What a unique and delightful write! I could imagine this
in a book of children's poetry. You certainly have talent Anya, keep
writing you have a wonderful future ahead of you I am sure!

Thanks for submitting this one to the contest! ~ Helena

[Seracies]

You gave the litte hanger a lot of feel and life. Well done.

[Kerwin]

very cool......

[Michael Wade]

Beautifully written! I agree with Freeland down there, you gave the ole hanger life and that's what counts. If there is anything I can send to make it feel better just let me know; pants, vest, or even a big ole coat!

[theludus]

Ha, you'll be a great talent one day if you stay the course. This is already better then some poems will ever be, poets? too.

Random can be good, as is the case here, & your use of rhyme and meter was pretty sharp too.

[Sarah B.]

Very cute poem, and very expressive of the objective. Thanks for your review as well :)

[Aekmy]

This is so cute. I loved it from line one. :D
And this can relate to so many other things than just the hanger. Great job :D
Keep writing.

Oh, and age does not matter, at all. You can be awesome and have gorgeous writing at any age. ;]

[Sam Freeland]

A delightful poem about an original subject (a hanger)
You gave life to your subject which all good poets do.
It makes me very happy to send my compliments to you.
If you keep on writing, you will soon find
you have left negative reviewers very far behind. sam

[Cherry Berry]

This poem is truly creative, and random. It is very cute. Well penned.

xox
Cherri