Mistakes

Mistakes

A Poem by Me Llamo Itzel Moctezuma ¥

I'm not the best person in the world because I make mistakes everyday, and that's okay. I guess, you can say it's "normal" for any us to f**k up everything. It happens to some of us, and no one is considered lucky. Luck isn't real. Luck doesn't solve it. You do.
I can't ask anyone for help.
I created this mess on my very own, and to be completely honest, not everyone cares as much as me. The most unexpected circumstances, involve an enormous amount of time and effort, but it'll only benefit me at the end because I chose to do it on my own. None of it matters, if you really think about it.
Once it happens, you can no longer take it back.
No one can say, or do anything. I may not be the best person in the world but hey, it's okay.
I can make a mistake on any given day. Maybe, it'll happen later on this afternoon or who knows? It might even creep up early in the morning, to give me a wake up call; smacking me across the face, with it's unsettling vibration, that's waiting to set me off.
I may not be the best person but I'll create total chaos whenever the world decides to challenge me. It'll be the worst mistake.
I'm up for any type of bullshit, that's willing enough to dismantle my living soul.
One of the few challenges - it's okay though. Luck can't solve it, but the world will soon see it's next big mistake. It will only involve me, as it's next challenge. Sooner or later, you'll see.
I'm not a bad person but one day, everything will make sense and eventually, I'll be the one claiming victory. -
I'll be the one laughing because it still wasn't enough to destroy me.

© 2017 Me Llamo Itzel Moctezuma ¥


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Never fear mistakes because mistakes are a vital part of life. So, if you fear mistakes, you fear living and taking risks. Your poem really gets across the message that we all make mistakes, but that just makes us human.

The character in your poem sees how quick the world is to criticize, yet knows that these challenges and opinions can be overcome.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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You are thinking these things through, seeing yourself, not just someone else's view of you, and that is good. Your vocabulary could use some brushing up - not because it's wrong to swear, but because it makes bad poetry.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

True words.......
MISTAKES are most important things in human life......
If you don't make mistakes that means you are perfect and their is no place for further improvement and evolution.....

Keep the good work

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Never fear mistakes because mistakes are a vital part of life. So, if you fear mistakes, you fear living and taking risks. Your poem really gets across the message that we all make mistakes, but that just makes us human.

The character in your poem sees how quick the world is to criticize, yet knows that these challenges and opinions can be overcome.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Me Llamo Itzel Moctezuma ¥
Me Llamo Itzel Moctezuma ¥

El Box, NV



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