This Emptiness

The writer is just out of words....trying to explain this absence ....this EMPTINESS....

This Emptiness

Ever since you left my couch

left me to watch the movie myself

the movie which is "Life" ,

It has turned upside down.

All the happiness is soaked by dementors

and all the sadness has washed away itself.

This truly is 

EMPTINESS

I don't know what to say

how to explain

when to describe

this feeling called

EMPTINESS

These days I just 

lie on my bed

gather the thoughts

remember the cheers

which are just invisible,

trying to lessen this

EMPTINESS 

Hope one day

I find another soul

like my own

who is starving

surviving this 

EMPTINESS

Reviews

[InsanityWriter]

You've described it well...

[Anonymous/Anjaan ( Yash V.)]

:D

[MENEMJZ]

Sir...u have definitely transformed urself to one of the best out here....i remember you struggling for words ..and here you are now....A TOP WRITER....SIR...:D..alwayz keep it up....

[Anonymous/Anjaan ( Yash V.)]

Man-O-Man...ur making me blush..am always thankful to people like u...who REALLY read my work...thnq fr everything...;)

[2BIGPAC]

Man...these lines makes me aware of the absence of a soul of the writers... surely going in the library...cheer up....ur writes always gets me cheered...I need one more cheering poem of you SIR...U = Awesome

[Anonymous/Anjaan ( Yash V.)]

Man...that was one big frm ur big heart...man...dnt make me go to cloud nine..:D...nd yeah...i will surely write one for u to cheer up...

[Balkaran Sidhu]

don't know if its ur best work...certainly liked it

[Anonymous/Anjaan ( Yash V.)]

Yeah..man i know....( it ws juss fr publicity XD ) nd U cn improve urself...ech nd every single..moment..:D...thnq...