I Am The Whole Damn Reality

The writer's a self righteous honest person..who used to be a satisfied happy person...and has witnessed....deaths in his life....but now says he has taken his life to a whole new level..nd moved on..

I Am The Whole Damn Reality

Look at me when am talking to you son

as there is no need to mourn.

I know what it feels like to have your soul broken

But don't regret as I know what will happen later.

Now I am taking you to  visit my life

who is known to be the last of the great generation :

Those were the days of springs

People were happy in their own

And there was I 

A moral example of 'from rags to riches'

Always wanting people to  have my kind of success

But I never knew that Lady Luck had other plans.

I lost everything... my fortune ...my loved ones...

Even my enemies.

Then I realized that all good I did was just not good ...for me...

I never realized That I was the meaning of perfection.

I was the "Best in The world at what I do."

I was The Whole Damn Reality.

People also say that I have used the word "I" ..more than 

Anyone in history

Since then there are some followers of mine but there is also 

the second side of the coin

There are people who say I am just a hypocrite.

But I know I ain't.

And Now here I am Right in Front of You

You believe me 

What you See is what you Get.

Follow Me ...You are following Reality...!

Author's Note

I wrote this poem by becoming It..!
I got on the role and felt like everything is fake except me....
I wrote this to help to understand the mind of those 'different' souls....

Reviews

[Michael Kevin Spencer]

This made me feel how lovely it is that we each need to go through the cycle ourselves, and form our own reality.

We are each a microcosmic of all of history, evolution and the cycles of creation.

I found the punchline very effective and literary and you could even continue to play with it.

[Anonymous/Anjaan ( Yash V.)]

Man....u made me understand more.... ;)

[Michael Kevin Spencer]

I dunno it's just the sort of stuff I ponder...

[Anonymous/Anjaan ( Yash V.)]

ohhk.... ;)

[once upon a time]

:)Really good!

[MENEMJZ]

You were juss..awesoming my mind...GREAT...EPIC...PSYCHO POEM...;)

[Gary H]

I liked the concept and thought the sense of what you were doing came across very well. I noticed you jumbled up the punctuation/layout a little and certainly the first two lines look best where you do not start each line with a capital letter unless you are starting a new sentence. Good the way you join the first lines with the last as you are following a thought pattern. As Michael says, you could play with this a lot more. There's a lot of ideas all pulling in different directions.

[Anonymous/Anjaan ( Yash V.)]

ohhk....Yeah..ur rite...... nd thnq....:D

[intuitivesoul]

I love it! Sounds enthusiastic!

[brianna vega]

:] awesome

[Anonymous/Anjaan ( Yash V.)]

;)...

[Balkaran Sidhu]

what a beautiful write.....not easy to do that !!

[Anonymous/Anjaan ( Yash V.)]

Not hard when there are friends complementing like you..thnq...;)