Being A Flower in The Garden Of Life

Guys just thought about those Iittle kids ....being bullied. One of the worst feeling in life...man they just loose hope... Please Say No to Bullying !!!!!

BEING A FLOWER IN THE GARDEN OF LIFE

I watch my fellow friends

Following the new trends,

Of being superior ,

Making others feel inferior

I watch my petals fall

In front of my so called  friends standing tall

As my tears are falling 

I see my "friends" rollin...

Sometimes I just wish looking in the blue sky 

That I just disappear in the sunset

Sometimes I just wish that I had never existed 

As this existence has no value

Sometimes I just look above me ..to see 
If HE is also seeing me
And sometimes I just think 
this is all the end result of 
"Being a Flower In The Garden Of Life".

Reviews

[James Yelton]

I really liked the point you were making. Here are some suggestions which you may or may not want to incorporate. Please understand to me they might possibly add more to your poem:

I watch my so-called friends:
Following all the new trends,
Of being superior or just,
Making others feel inferior

I watch as my petals fall
In front of my 'friends'
And as my tears fall,
I see them rollin...

I sometimes also look at the blue sky,
wish I could just disappear at sunset
I also just wish I had never existed,
As this existence has no value to me

Sometimes I just look above me ..to see
If HE is also seeing me
And sometimes I just think
this is all the end result of
"Being a Flower In The Garden Of Life".

[Anonymous/Anjaan ( Yash V.)]

Thnx sir... Am glad that u read it so carefully...I think ur right... I will make the changes...thnx

[R.V]

The Way you have expressed such a sensitive issue , Hats off mate.
:)

[Anonymous/Anjaan ( Yash V.)]

Glad it touched you ...

[MENEMJZ]

;)...BE STRONG...!

[Rochelle Roberts]

Beautifully written, it reminds me of how I used to feel... Keep faith :)

[Anonymous/Anjaan ( Yash V.)]

Thnx...much appreciated... ;)