Pilgrims of Chance

 

What shapes we make,

            we pilgrims of chance!

How we carve out the world,

            and leave each other

                        stunned,

with new fissures in our hearts.

A continuous jellyroll of disappointments,

            I in you,

            You in me.

What a funny pair we make!

Reeling against nature

and forming the formless

into what we believe is best,

only to be bowled over

            by the larger mechanics of the universe.

The fabric changes under our feet,

            the walls turn into the floor.

The cat is speaking Japanese

            and giving great advice.

And we are still so convinced

            of our deft plans,

            our plotted lines and schedule,

while even the earth shifts us

                        in our sleep.

 

 

Reviews

[amanda]

I love this! So comedic! Very impressive, pulling out the laugh on a subject that could have otherwise been very dark. An affirmation that we just have to laugh at our lack of control in this life.
My favorite part:
The cat is speaking Japanese and giving great advice
And we are still so convinced of our deft plans, our plotted lines and schedule
While even the earth shifts us in our sleep

Very nice!

[The realest]

As stated before i awalys enjoy your work the struggle of self and other hidden metaphors. You have a really good ability for making serious subjects read with humor. great job