What's Happening?

What's Happening?

A Story by Nina Johnson
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I just wrote this... Quite boring but... Yeah just a very very short simple story. :) Please enjoy and please please please give me feedback. :)

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“Rikki? Rikki are you ok? Rikki…” Haley’s voice got louder. “Rikki, it’s over.” Her perfect, cute little British accent boomed against my ear-drums. “Rikki…” I slightly opened my eyes. Her face was 1 inch away from mine. I stared into her hazel eyes, and admired her bright red, orange hair that today was pressed straight. “Haley? What—why—are you here?”

“You fell Rikki. Right on your head. You sprained your ankle. You’re in poor condition.

 “But Haley!” I gasped. My words came out rushed. I was breathing heavy and fast.  “What happened? How did I fall? I remember nothing…”

“I will tell you when you are healed.” She scowled playfully.

“Haley!” I yelled while she walked out the hospital room. I had lifted my arm up and just then did I realize that my body was completely invisible and gone.

© 2009 Nina Johnson


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Added on March 3, 2009

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Nina Johnson
Nina Johnson

Pittsburgh, PA



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Well, I am 11. My name is Nina. My Birthday is September 26 and I have been writing since I was 3. I write various Genres so I can't pick just one. I am in 6th grade Creative Writing and I just wanted.. more..