Sinking

Break me
Take me
Don't hold me
Shake me

I'm falling down
Deeper and deeper
A never ending fall
Down down down

I'm not coming up
It's just too high
Sinking faster and faster
Screaming

You can yell
But who will hear
It's hard to think
Everything is near

The sounds cease
Then whispers start
Menacing
Deceiving

"it's ok"
They whisper
Just sleep
Sleep...

Maybe I will
Just sleep
Will I wake?
Falling falling

My soul is slipping
Faster and faster
He took it
My soul to take

Reviews

[realmwriter]

Ive written pieces such as this my self and find I like yors better than my own. I like the flow and the ever so slight choppieness of it, lends to the tension one would surely feel! Great piece!

[AngelAfterlife]

Love it :)