Love

            I have this feeling deep inside            and it burns with me like a flame

    Never being distinguished never tamed      I can't really concentrate when it 

 screams  at me. It makes my head feel lighter and my legs feel weak, I get so caught up in it I find it hard to speak. I see everyhing in a different perspective and choose to take on new electives. I got lost when I was looking for you, I never knew you  were here all along, not someone new. I love the way you'd take me in your arms and never let go. I wouldn't think anything in those moments, Except for I love you, I know. It may sound stupid. Maybe a little niave.  But I couldn't help it, I was hit by

cupid.  Maybe it was a bad idea to let you inside, but how I felt I can't deny. It    

         wasn't like all the rest.I didn't have to be my best. I could just be me.

               something not many people get to see.They see this convincing 

                   laugh and stupid smile. But when I'm with you my love

                        spreads for miles. Is it bad if I care so much?

                               I guess I can't help the feeling I get

                                             when we touch. So I ask

                                                   myself what this

                                                         is, I know

                                                love.

Reviews

[Victoria PoetryBunny]

oo can tell this structure wasn't easy to do, i should know i'v done one of my own, especially trying to post it here, and it messes up your structure, really cute with the heart :) nice idea, simple title for it... few spelling errors... i really enjoyed this, i like it a lot, each line is written well, nicely chosen words, i like how you wrote this line, which happens to be the line i seen the little spelling error in (everything)...
" I see everyhing in a different perspective and choose to take on new electives."
:)

[AngelAfterlife]

tee hee... its a heart :)