You're So Far

I've been on this road

For just far too long..

 

I can't help it I guess

You tell me

 

                                   "Just go, be happy"

 

I can't really be happy without you..

Which is sad

 

You want me as much as I do you..

Why aren't we together?

 

You're so far..

 

I've never even met you

 

Yet I just know...

   "I love you"

 

 

Reviews

[WynterPhoenix]

I agree with Kim. There is a sense of loneliness. I'm not sure, but I'm guessing this is about a celebrity crush? That's what I get from "You're so far. I've never even met you." I could be wrong though. It's a great write!

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I can feel the lonliness in this one
I like how you crossed out I Love You.
So effective, nicely written and expressed