I Hate You

I hate you

I hate the way you make me smile
And the way you make the world worth while

I hate the way you look at me
Igniting something inside you see

I hate that stupid cocky grin
So mischievous it's almost a sin

I hate how soft your voice can get
And the way you have my heart locked and set

I hate those stupid midnight calls
Knowing that with each one I continue to fall

I hate the way you're always right
When you know I need you day and night

I hate how you know everything about me
And the way that you abuse my key

 

I hate everything about you
But what I hate the most can't be true

I hate the fact that I love you

Reviews

[Mr. ECHO]

very intersting. overall well.

[RedInk524]

Very interesting how two opposite feelings entwine! I like how you portrayed that.

[Joshua J. Certain]

Such contrast between love and hate very well done (^_^)

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

Love to hate has never been so apt in this prose, well done

[XxtaintedxX]

I hate that I love them because I shouldn't love them Dx!

[Scisenheart]

thats really lovely, yet why do you hate someone who obyiously loves you very much? "i hate the fact that i love you" a very poiniant and meaningful last line, very deep and interesting.
Scusenheartxx :D

[Aurora Lynn]

Great write! Often times hating and loving someone can seem like the same thing. Very well written. Well done!

~Aurora

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This is really amazing,
love the feelings I know these feelings,
been there before, i like this.

[JanuaryDreamer♥]

7 things (: haha, it's so similar to the song...anyway, this poem was a great piece of work! I really enjoyed reading it and it was very relatable! Awesome write! Keep on writing!!
~gabbz

p.s. http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Hr0Wv5DJhuk