Have You Ever?

Have You Ever?

A Poem by XxtaintedxX

Ever lie in bed awake?

Wondering which path to lead, and which to take?

 

Ever feel lost and insecure?

Wondering what things you'll have to endure?

 

Ever feel confused and scared?

Not knowing that's happening, completely unprepared?

 

Ever love someone so much it hurts?

Them being the only ones who can give you comfort?

 

Ever lie just to get your way?

Not caring about the future, just for that day?

 

Ever put your heart in the wrong hands?

While they ruin your dreams, unaware of their plans?

 

Ever hurt so much you want to die?

Not being able to breathe, you don't want to cry?

 

Ever be like me?

If you've been like this, then you can see

© 2011 XxtaintedxX


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I like it, what you're saying, you're not using th correct words though: "Not being able to breathe, you don't want to cry?" You need to add something else that rhymes with die. One of my favorites of yours though.
~One point taken and one point given~

Posted 13 Years Ago


this is great!

Posted 13 Years Ago



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My name is Allyssa(: I'm 15 years old..Uhm..I write a lot of poetry and songs and other such things. I like some of my writing but others I hate and I don't know why people like them..My favorites are.. more..

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