Attention Starved Syndrome

Mislead, and misguided.
Half dead, or maybe,
undecided.
Disconnected.
Mind infected.
I waste myself.
I'm so defected.
My very existance,
undectected.
Rejected.

So, here I am
a tad displaced.
Pity me,
a real sad case.
Indispensable,
I may be.
Who cares
for invisible me.
Dismissed- indefinately.
Undoubtedly.

Suffocated, Rearranged.
Irritated, I'm deranged.
Disapproved, and disregarded.
I've been removed.
I feel departed.
Drained of Love,
Left illhearted.
I must be retarted.
I've forgotten where I've started.

So what?
I'm Illminded.
Outta luck,
gagged and blinded.
I beg and plead
to be dismembered.
To this life
I have surrendered.
I'll be forgotten.
Not remembered.

Reviews

[octane143]

I agree, very good read. It flows so nicely. Touchy subject too. It's sad really how we beat ourselves down and torture ourselves.
Indispensable,
I may be.
Who cares
for invisible me.
Reflects alot of my writing, thank you again for showing me I'm not alone. Great insight into who you are!

[SN]

Oh I'm definitely adding this to my reading list. The flow is so smooth, the wording is wonderful, the reader immediately plunges into the atmosphere.
Very well done!

[Truc]

This poem flows really nicely!
It really gives mean image on how you think and what kind of person you are.

[Ravenskald]

yep it flows nicely, and gives a series of insights into your thoughts, afew typos that need tidying up. But hey I've just been going back and tidying uo some of my reviews too. ( and my poems)
Overall though I liked this and enjoyed reading it.
~Raven