That littel girl.

Not one of my best :P Made it for the word prompt.

As a littel girl you expect,

A blossoming "flower",

multi-colored rainbows incorporated in my everyday thoughts,

And fancy dresses & shoes.

Well...

I DONT WANT THAT.

I have an idea,

LET ME BE ME!

Let me wear my jeans with holes,

instead of etiquette classes

let me paint my art & write my sole out.

whether you know or not,

my thoughts are dark,grimson,an crimson.

Im not that littel girl.

:)

 

 

Author's Note

What do you think? :D

Reviews

[MickeyM]

Love it! so true:)

[Ashley Jordan]

I could hardly imagine living with sunshine and rainbows bounding around in my head all day. Vomit inducing sweetness overload. This was cute. Reminds me of myself when I was in high school. (:

[Bianca La Salle]

i love how u use all caps as u demand what you want.

[alerodri]

love it be dirty ,girly what evr but be yourself, nice

[Calypso]

Interesting.
Reminds me of my sister.

[castargirl]

it made me laugh good job with that

[Silent Knight]

Very nice. It screams "I am unique so deal with it!"

[Helpless]

an individual among the crowd! an independent spirit! and an amusing one at that! loved this!

[Alicia Hirshey]

I'm in love with this maddie.

[Allen Smuckler]

Maddie,
I think the poem could be better if you checked it before posting...unless the misspellings were planned and with purpose...good write, though for most part with a meaningful message.
allen
oh, btw....lose the photo...it's not cute or significant to the poem.