I smile and say "love you."

You yell at me every day but I smile and say "I love you.

"If I were talking to me mother that way I would be beaten!" but I smile an say I "I love you."

"Ill be damned if youve had a bad life!" but I smile an say "I love you."

"So what your dads gone! At least he never beat you! *slap*" but I smile an say "I love you."

Im starting to think do I really

Love you?...

Author's Note

Thank you sam for the insparation! ^-^

Reviews

[joshua deathdealer]

Love this write Maddie. Well done.

[Ruth]

Yes, I can see why too love..this is concisely hard hitting! I like the structure..free thought, almost and it makes the reader want to stand up and say...."why?"
Powerful!
xx

[Alice Bounty]

=[ This makes me sad. But it's a great poem.