One more day...

One more day...

A Poem by Magic plus the mayhem.

Count the #'s on the scale,

exercise till your ill,

you feel like your weight's going down hill.

Starve your self another day,

goal weight 128.

You have to get like the models.

"Im never going to get that far",

another day of this hell...

 

© 2011 Magic plus the mayhem.


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Hmm well it reminds me of myself I'm 110 and still going down I'm not the best example because I take things too far

Posted 13 Years Ago


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ahhh...... I feel like that sometimes... but i don't starve myself about it..... i do it for other reasons... but then my friends flip out and force me to eat :P

Posted 13 Years Ago


I feel this this nowadays. I feel so fat and ugly...

Posted 13 Years Ago


A sorrowful story of a hidden obsession a voice comes through tired of the goals and constant tiredness seeping and emanating from a stream of pushing limits striving for a perfection never reached because of its constantly changing form.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Great piece again...I like what can be said or voiced in minimal pieces!
xx

Posted 13 Years Ago


good opening

Posted 13 Years Ago


Excellent way of getting your point across.

Posted 13 Years Ago


I've been there, I starve dmyself for a year, jsut cause I didn't wanna weigh to much, and now, I just don't wanna eat >:/

Posted 13 Years Ago


Everyone is beautiful just the way they are. Maybe you don't look the way you want to, but all the beauty is on the inside. Don't starve yourself. It's better to be healthy human being without a perfect body, than having a "perfect" body and having some eating disorder in order to have it.
Believe in yourself, and that with exercise and good nutrition you shall achieve your goal. :D

Posted 13 Years Ago


Keep reaching out, you are hitting home for so many people.

Posted 13 Years Ago


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