To soon.

---katlyns 1st session.

"So how did your addiction to self-harm start?", Those words slipped out of her mouth ever so easily as if she had said these words a thousand times before.

I sat there for a second then lifted my head up as if it weighed a ton in order to see amy sitting there with neon-green clipboard in one hand and tapping a black-ink pen on her left thigh.

I might as well I might as well whispered the words I said "The year my dad died." "How did your father die? Or is it to soon?" "To soon."

Amy seemed shocked that I didint feel like talking at the moment.

"How bout we end are session here today?" "k." I said as I grabed my shoulder bag,swung it over my shoulder an walked out as if I had something to do.

 

Author's Note

P.S this is not how counseling has been with me. This is how I think it will be.

Reviews

[paradise]

its pretty true counseling sucks its a real b***h reminds me of it

[blue blue blue.]

This makes me want to read more,
which I am about to do.

[Ruth]

Interested to read more love and personal experience can lead to a great story...great work xx

[Sabrina Demartini]

nice very nice(:

[alerodri]

chapter 2
The room was quiet, so quiet I could hear my cell’s diving when a little bald man came next to me
- Shall we start
- Want do u want me to say
It started fast like fire burning a leaf insignificant at first, but slowly taking over. I decided to lose a bit of weight since I was always bullied because of it and wanted to be a part of something to be notice. I never felt good about myself always like an outsider because of the way I see the world, it is not about food but about the pain and anger that eats me alive it is truly my suicide attempt.
-so u want to die
-No, I am just scared to live in these ugly world

[Silent Knight]

I really hate how counselors expect you to be all "Ok here is my life story!" and stuff. I don't like talking to them.

[joshua deathdealer]

Nicely done. I really like the last sentence.

this is beautiful, in a kind of sad way. I can't explain it better than that, but it's really good! i feel kind of like i'm in the room, even though there isn't much in detail. Really good work! i agree with calypso that there need to be a new paragraph efter every speaking sentence, but that's minor things, and as long as i "feel" the writing i don't care a bout that :) so keep it up!!

[Calypso]

I believe this would be a lot better if you made it longer. Also you need make a new paragraph with each change of speaker.
I'm not trying to kick you butt, but it could use a little editing.
Let me know when chapter 2 is up!