Runaway...

I try to breathe eyes wandering aimless.
I try to scream but no one can see me, no one can hear.
I shut my eyes tightly,
And hide out here for the night
Escape to my safe place.
Let go of my thoughts
Vanish without a trace
I'll never be caught.

I hope so...

 

Author's Note

Tell me if its any good :)

Reviews

[Silent Knight]

Very good. I tried to run away once but I had to call my mom and have her pick me up because my blood sugar was really low and I almost fainted... FAIL...

[Ruth]

This is claustrophobically versed, I like the less than obvious reason to it, as to why these thoughts are processing..great write! xx

[WynterPhoenix]

It's very good. I love line "I'll never be caught." Great job!