Down.

Re-lapse...

Stop the violence,stop the pain.

Throw the razor blades an more down the drain.

Wish once,wish twice.

You want every will be all right.

Tell your self this is the last,while your mind is brought to tears thinking of the past.

4 months later your feeling just fine,

then something comes up.

Your not all right...

You need help.

But just so you know there is hope.

<3

You need to know that your life matters.

 

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Author's Note

This pome is about how some peopel may re-lapes an there is still hope. :)

Reviews

[Kat]

i love all your poems i always look forward to reading them good job :) this helped

[CharlesMonroe]

I love it Maddie, it's amazing (:

[frozensakura]

this is a great poem. very powerful.

[Kayla K]

This hit me hard, because I was close to that the other day. Then I remembered that the 23rd would be my 6 month mark. Thank you, for this poem.

[LeaflessTree]

Hope. Best part? :0 Stop the violence,stop the pain.

Throw the razor blades an more down the drain.

Wish once,wish twice.

You want every will be all right.

Tell your self this is the last,while your mind is brought to tears thinking of the past.

4 months later your feeling just fine,

then something comes up.

Your not all right...

You need help.

But just so you know there is hope.

[Silent Knight]

Very nice! There is always hope, but it is sometimes harder to find.

[Raven Starhawk]

Hopefully people will read this and see its message. It is powerful and perhaps holds a vast amount of truth that some do not want to see. Well penned!

[WynterPhoenix]

A great poem, Maddie. One of your best in my opinion! Going into my favorites.