Seduction/Aphrodisiac

Er... Yeah.

Lather me in lavender,

Rinse me in rose,

Wrap me in silk,

Show me what you know.

Dip me in spices,

Feed me sweets,

Cover me with cream,

Tell me why our skin heats.

Soak me in your scent,

Fill me with fire,

Cool me down with words,

No, darling, I will not tire.

Just caress me with feathers,

Seduce me with your lips,

I am your aphrodisiac,

Let me unman you with my kiss.

 

Reviews

[Andrea Vargas]

This was very enjoyable..great job!

[Alicia Hirshey]

Loved every bit of this.

[Science girl]

Wow! Just wow. Such a seductive piece. Loved every minute of it. I could read this over and over again.

[Scandalous]

I can imagine a sexy pair of lips whispering this into my ear, which is so very seductive! You did a great job with imaging, I'm not quite sure about line separation but it is still a great poem! Keep up the great work!

~ Scandalous

[DreyaArt]

beautiful writing, i like the thought process, things that people often think of but never have the nerve to say. well done :)

[.........]

I could not love this any more than I do. I love the seductiveness of this poem. I am literally in awe with these words. Definitely going in my favorites. Damn

[Hatchling]

Amazing poem!!!

[Seshat Nidaba]

This is a vertiable sensual delight to the ear of the reader and to the mind of the elemental human being. Terrific work! Please do write more like this, it amounts to a special request. xD

I don't give 100s easily, but I'm afraid I have no choice.

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you for a amazing poem. Every line was strong and no wasted words. I like the desire and emotion create by your beautiful and strong words. Thank you for a excellent poem.
Coyote

[Fuzzy_Poluzah]

......cant find words, amazing write though, nice work!