Seduction/Aphrodisiac

Er... Yeah.

Lather me in lavender,

Rinse me in rose,

Wrap me in silk,

Show me what you know.

Dip me in spices,

Feed me sweets,

Cover me with cream,

Tell me why our skin heats.

Soak me in your scent,

Fill me with fire,

Cool me down with words,

No, darling, I will not tire.

Just caress me with feathers,

Seduce me with your lips,

I am your aphrodisiac,

Let me unman you with my kiss.

 

Reviews

[Eagle Cruagh]

Yes, that will work.

[Moflo]

Nicely written! You stayed true to the form in a superb way! I think you executed this nicely, nice rhymes, nice word choices. Great work!

[JRB]

sweet in thought and hot

[J Todd Underhill]

I like the picture you chose to couple with this poem, This is one lucky man. well written indeed!

[Muse]

I think you seduced many with this poem. Hot!

[Samantha ~virginpoet]

Loved it especially the last line

[Juliet]

This poem has an excellent flow and fits together perfectly. Very enjoyable, great write.

[Amanda Buscemi]

I love the simple demands and attempt at rhythm ~ it is almost there. Nice work!

[Poetic Beauty]

A strong woman knows what she wants. A wise woman goes after it with no holding back. This is a very sensual piece done without over detailing and done with a delectable taste that stirs up all the senses and lets the imagination run rapid.

[unknown]

Very nice poem!