Lost My Muse

Bleh REALLY all over the place. Writer's block?! GAH

 Oh pixie

              Oh fairy

 Oh Muse of mine

              Why oh why must you be such

A challenging find?

               Oh princess,

Oh villain,

               Oh imagination sublime,

Oh why must you be

               So far from mine?

Oh music,

               Oh castle,

Oh flawless rhyme,

               Why, Oh why are you

So completely unkind?

                Oh fairy

Oh pixie

                Oh muse of mine,

Come hither come here,

                         Come let us                                     

pause

                                   time.

Author's Note

Bleh let me know, it's not very good.

Reviews

[lawrence bear]

this is a great piece, smooth flow of words.

lawrence

[Chris Smith Welshpoetcs]

This is good, whimsical and well written. Good poem my friend.

[ChristianM]

I thought it was great and something I can relate to. Haven't posted anything on here in a while. I mean to change that. Great write!

[Crowley]

What are you talking about...this is a great light look at the ever elusive process of creation and I really liked the cadence and rhymes. The last lines are magic. Great job.

[Matthew Kult]

Hello Adora,

I think it is very good, you shouldn't be so quick to judge. Sometimes, we just need to push out what we can to get past the block. Sometimes they nuggets of gold....others coal. And sometimes we can turn those coals into diamonds.

regards,

Matthew

[Everett DeValle]

I love the form and flow of your beautiful poetry...purely sublime.

[Michael X]

I wish I could capture such form, lovely work, it sparkles Adora :)

[Fuzzy_Poluzah]

Lovely....simply.....EPIC!
loved it!

[paul]

this is very good. last three lines are extraordinary