i remember when i loved you

bleh

...I remember

When     you

Breathed just

w a r m

Passion.

When     you

Wore jewels of

 e f f o r t l e s s

intelligence.

When    you

Knew what was

                o n l y

True.

When     I

Proclaimed so

                b l i n d l y

to love,

but only

                y o u.

Author's Note

Let me know lol

Reviews

[GioVonnie]

This has a nice flow to it..

[Fuzzy_Poluzah]

Work you magic child! :D

[Dream Weaver]

I thought this was quite lovely...

[David W Moore III]

short and slightly surreal, this piece has beauty incarnate. She stands up and proclaims her place.

[.]

ahhh...a lovely flow to this..eloquently put..

[Crowley]

"jewels of effortless intelligence" is an original and very good line. I liked this rememberence of what it once, a bit sad but very well written...Loved it.

[Matthew Kult]

It was very passionate. I like how you did the layout, and was very touching.

With Love,

Jaidyn