Let Go

Relax

Hear the laughter,

See the sun,

Feel the breeze,

Now hold it all close,

And breathe...

Laugh with the laughter,

Smile back at the sun,

Be swayed to and fro...

Now let your soul breathe,

And just let go...

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Creepy Swine Guy]

I like this poem. It speaks of something that I have been pondering recently. It speaks of being in nature as opposed to watching nature. I find simple to be elegant and this is an example. You didn't try to write in grand prose. You were elegantly simple in your word choices.

[Justin Street]

I just wish i could embrace this advice but..sadly in my mind it went like this
bleeding laughter
scorching sun
feel blade breeze
can't breathe
scream at the laughs
cry at the sin
be knocked to and fro
trapped soul can't breath
it has let go
great write
it makes me feel better that so many people like you are on here
let your emotions flow
-justin

[ChristianM]

Beautiful poem that makes me want to go enjoy the sunshine.
Great job Adora

[Fuzzy_Poluzah]

lolz...nice poem, i love how it makes you just want to relax and have fun, you know?? Not worry, or cry, or think!

[Jason Ellis]

What I got out of it was that you were, basically, giving someone who may be dying this advice:

Embrace life one last time, with all you have. Enjoy the last moments of your mortal life. Then, willingly move into Death's embrace. There is no need to fight it, just go on. Heaven awaits.

[Bexfinch]

oh this is awsome its so care free this poem made my day thanks for sending it my WAY !!!