Only With You

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I want sunshine,

Bright moons,

Spring rains,

Clear nights,

A million stars,

And skies of endless blue,

I want to live a happy life,

But only if it’s with you.

Author's Note

Let Me Know What You Think..

Reviews

[Warick Ten Bohmer]

It's a long list of what you want, but made much more humble by the fact that you wouldn't accept any of it without that special someone. Then again that could also be a sign of greed, not accepting what you could have just because that one person isn't around to share it with you.

It's an awesome poem none the less, very simple and straight forward. Totally worth reading more than once and very very easy to read over and over again.

[Mike Espinosa]

This is a cute poem. I like the emotion behind it.

This may be me thinking too much (which is often the case), but I think some of these things are contradictory. I like this, since dream worlds tend to be in some way. In my head, a sky of endless blue could not have a bright moon or a million stars, since they would obstruct the blue. I know you mean to contrast day and night, but I have yet to find a good adjective for skies that would make it "daytime" without being cliche. Just something to think about, not necessarily a change that must happen.

This is a great poem though.

[Iota]

That's the beautiful thing about love it makes us want the wonderful things you write about here. Love is sunshine, midnight moons, spring rains, clear nights... but what is it, without someone to experience them with. Good write~

[Dutch Jr.]

Such a beautiful, and simple image being portrayed through words here. I can picture it: tow lovers under the star-dotted night sky in a drizzle of rain, falling asleep to awake to a clear blue sky. Beautiful.

[Bexfinch]

aww thats so cute

[Jason Ellis]

Ah, this is good.
Very good.
Fantastic, even.
Describing the life you wish to live, and then refusing to live it unless you're with.. whoever it is you may be referring to.
Great job :D

[Fuzzy_Poluzah]

aw.. cute!
Great read.