The Hurt

Bleh

Nothing can hold,

Capture,

Describe,

Rid,

Touch,

Taste,

Or feel,

This agonizing hurt,

That seems so real.

Author's Note

Let Me Know What You Think

Reviews

[Fuzzy_Poluzah]

Epic... short, but epic!

[ChristianM]

I think we've all been there.
A hurt that seems as if it will never heal. The loss of someone dear.
Someone breaking your heart. Heart aching depiction of that feeling.

[Warick Ten Bohmer]

Sweet that didn't take a long time to read :L

Very direct and to the point, a well written piece and I don't think I could improve it in any way shape or form.

[Dutch Jr.]

The simplicity and clarity of the writing is what makes it beautiful. "That seems so real." The last line, again, leaves me thinking.... or maybe I'm reading too deep. Nice write, though.