Calling For You

Bleh?

I am falling,

And I am inevitably

Drowning.

But secretly,

Enjoying,

What is apparently,

Endowing,

A tainted blue.

I am falling,

And inevitably

I am calling,

For you.

Author's Note

Tell me what you think.

Reviews

[ChristianM]

I'm not the greatest with metaphors and hidden meanings, but I enjoyed this. We all have someone in our lives we can always rely on. That one person who we know will do just about anything for us. That's what i take away from this.
Nicely conveyed. Then again I could be completely off the mark. I'm not a poet so...lol

[Alessander]

simple to the point - the parallel structure of falling, drowning, enjoying, endowing, calling is consistent and effective.

[Jason Ellis]

Ooo (:
This is nice.
It just flows so well.
And when I read it, each of the words seemed to echo within my mind.

[Michael X]

I agree with the reviewers below, great metaphorical meaning,
because the interpretation is open, I think the flow is sculpted
precise wording reallly brings this to life Adora. awsome job, keep it up.

[Crowley]

Reeling them off like fishing line lately. This one had a relaxing tone, comfortable in not needing to take control and letting things happen...why not, they are going to anyway. Good job.

[Coyote Poetry]

Some falls are good and some falls may get us in big trouble. I like the poem. Create a vision of wanting something with all your desires. A outstanding poem.
Coyote

[Dutch Jr.]

Great word choice in this work, a poem painted with simple, yet meaningful words.

[Sweet_pale_cacophony]

It is nice though you could have been a bit more elaborate but i think it is okay to be precise in content...the feeling of falling..is well conveyed...