The Euphoric Shower

I like showers? D:

Stepping onto the cool porcelain

Blanketed with steam,

Letting my mind drift out the window,

Feeling the hot water molest me.

 

As my up turned face relaxes,

The dewy air kisses my skin

In places the humid streams have yet to be,

In places my fingers have already been.

 

Velvety vanilla suds slide over my body

Sending sensual sighs to echo in the sticky air,

Hiding my body from the thickening mist,

Only to be washed away, leaving me bare.

 

The sultry drops fluidly drip from my hair,

From every angle and every curve,

Leaving every inch of skin sensitive and taut,

Creating a sense of euphoria that leaves me unnerved.

 

Author's Note

Erm, i'm a rather shy person lol so it's not uber easy for me to write like this e.e but I was inspired so there you have it. Have Fun :P And lemme know what you think

Reviews

[GTVile]

Very nice! I liked the way that you took what can be a mundane experience and infused it with the personal connections that you personally feel; thusly making us feel them as well. You wove the words in a way that made it very intimate. Good job.

[Iota]

ummm, yes I agree with Coyate. But I must say this poem is about a shower and yet it is so hot. Lord, that was good, lol great write!

[Coyote Poetry]

The poem is beautiful. At my old age. A hot shower and light exercise make my back and leg pain go away. The shower is the last place of peace. I like the description and your feel of peace. A excellent poem.
Coyote

[Soul Magic✯]

wow you created a very hot piece. makes me wanna take a shower *LOL* amazing ink... i enjoyed reading this piece :)

[ChristianM]

You set out to create a poem, one which you needed to step out of your skin in a way.
A bit more on the mature side, and the reader definitely feels that, senses it too for sure.
Your evocative side shines through here Adora.
Bravo

[MissWordSmith]

ah...it took guts to write some parts of this i bet! but, it really was a great write.. who doesn't love a soothing hot shower? great idea by the way, very original..

[Frantzuu]

"Feeling the hot water molest me."powerful line there.
This is a great piece, the imagery here is stunning, and your descriptions are vivid. awesome write. :D