That Smile I Love

Bleh

Give me a smile love,

And make it bright,

We’re gonna go dance

The night away tonight.

 

We’ll go pick up some roses,

A coffee made without beans,

And we’ll see pictures in the clouds,

Watch the sun in our day-dreams.

 

We’ll follow the rainbow,

To a pot of whispers and wishes,

And we’ll swing to the sky,

Laughing at our hits and misses.

 

We’ll lie in cool grass,

And run about in the rain,

We’ll sleep under green trees,

And we’ll live in a world of no disdain.

 

So give me that smile I love,

And please do make it bright,

Because we’re gonna go dance

Our night away tonight.

 

Author's Note

Lemme Know :P

Reviews

[deeps]

Coffee made without beans, way to cute.
This is flawless, so well written.
Wonderful rhyme and excellent flow of words.
You have talent. This is beautiful.

[Antonio Valentino]

What an adorable poem. Well, you gave me a smile love, so lets go dance!

Antonio :)

[The Wave]

love it! :)

very nice write here, great flow and loved all the imagery!
kept my attention from beginning till end and made me smile! very fun to read indeed
good job

[Coyote Poetry]

It is very good. Flow and words held me to the end. I like the feel and movement in the poem. A fun poem to read. A excellent poem.