Waking Up

Erm, I just woke up when I wrote this... so um not so great... lol

The wisps of light

From the rising sun,

Greet her in the morning

Easing another day’s run.

 

The welcomed warmth,

Of beaded hot water,

The ache of tired eyes,

An ache that never matters.

 

The soft echoes of a yawn

And the satisfying morning stretch,

Blinking away her dreams,

Images that she needs to catch.

 

One slow step at a time now

Thoughts running back to mind,

Savouring the bitter-sweet warmth

Of the coffee she had trouble to find.

 

Watching the soft light,

From the waking sun,

Wishing her a good morning,

And an easy day’s run.

 

Author's Note

I wrote this while I was waking up

Reviews

[MIB]

I love this one too... your talented with your writing, you describe waking up so brilliantly :D excellent work ;)

[Matthew Kult]

Hello again,

It had excellent imagery, course I was hoping it would take a turn toward a more.....well let's not go there just yet. I would hate to scare you off before we can even get aquainted.

I must say you have a way with words. A uniqueness about you, course it could be that you are from Canada.

Always,

Matthew