Wishing Glass

Random Poem =/ Not my best work.

Let’s fall back,

Into the soft winter snow,

Let’s whisper secrets,

Words no one will know.

 

Let’s swim away,

Through oceans of honey,

Let’s warm our skin,

Beneath the skies when it’s sunny.

 

Let’s float around the world,

On imaginary wings,

Let’s sleep on white clouds,

And hear the birds sing.

 

Let us breathe in the scent

Of flowers and honey-bees,

And let’s close our eyes,

Sleeping beneath the trees.

 

Let us fall back now,

Into warm summer grass,

And let’s whisper our secrets,

Into the wondrous wishing glass.

 

 

Author's Note

Um it isn't my best work, just wrote this off the top of my head.

Reviews

[The Lone Wolf Prose]

Very beautiful. It floats and I could feel the winds of like this dreamland far away. It took me to another place almost like in a dream that I once had. The rhymes are very sing-song but its not childish. Its crafted between the make believe of childhood and reality. A real feeling of Alice in Wonderland. Wonderful. Thank you for sharing!

[MIB]

Brilliant poem, I love the way you write, it's so rhythmical. keep up the awesome work. ;)

[Fuzzy_Poluzah]

hmmmm..........................i wonder if u can buy wishing glass ;-.
great read though!
bewildering!
~Fuzzy

[Michael X]

dreamy, you've captured the essence of a day pondering in pillowy romance. such talent. subtle and
beautiful descriptions. i found my heart set adrift.

[Impulse]

I think its beautiful and has a strong structure. 10/10