Love Me So

A love poem

Oh kiss me love,

Swallow me whole,

Hold me tightly,

And never let go.

 

Touch me dear,

Make me tremble,

Feel me thoroughly,

And let’s forget to remember.

 

Admire me sweet-heart,

Watch me shine,

Look me in the eyes,

And know that you are mine.

 

Take me darling,

Let me scream,

Wrap me in passion,

And bring to life this dream.

 

Oh love me honey,

Oh please love me so,

Hold me close dear,

And don’t let go.

 

Author's Note

Lemme know what you think. It's a rather free-verse poem so yeah..

Reviews

[Iota]

I always wonder if one found a love like this would they push them away because it is too good to be true? Not directed at you but the poem made me think about that. It is free verse and yes I love free verse it allows for more creativity to me. I think it is a good poem, that flows well.

I can tell you that Coyote reviews everyone male and female. I see him all over the place, reviewing everyone and not just women. I should know he reviews my work all the time. Interesting page you have here.

[Jessica O.]

Nicely done! I love free verse, and this one does justice :)

[Tara Ghorm]

((Prodigo's comment makes me lol))
I do like the poem. I enjoy free verse, because there's so much you can do with it! I kind of enjoy the way that the poem becomes almost more... suggestive as it gets closer to the end. In my on poetry I like to ease people into it! Ha ha!

Anyway, nice write!

[Prodigo]

Coyote and Eagle, stop hunting hot chicks on writing websites, it's pathetic. As for your writing, it's splendid and I am interested in seeing more. Serious criticism comes from other serious writers, I suggest you ignore the two tools below me and continue what you're doing. It reads much like a song, but make some adjustments to your actions...don't be afraid to break the rhyme scheme in consequence to using a terrible word just to make it rhyme.

[Coyote Poetry]

I like the flow and the movement of your words. Short and to the point. A excellent poem.
Coyote

[Lexi =]]

Great Poem. You expressed your feeling really well. It flowed greatly =]

[Eagle Cruagh]

This is an exciting poem it is full of passion,
love , romance and almost an abandonment .
Exciting !

The choice of words is good and the structure
is beautiful. The flow is lilting and strong.

I love it. I think it is a great poem.

Rate ---- 100 %

---- Eagle Cruagh