where are you now...

Bleh

Where Are You Now…

 

I’ve nothing left

To remember you by,

But a bit of doubt,

A pinch of confusion,

A handful of wounds,

And endless

Apathy. 

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

You said it all in so few words. When we have nothing left. Apathy is the place we land. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Tate Morgan]

Well now it is good that you feel for him at all

[Adora.xo]

Haha, exactly :)

[Alana McGuire]

Short and to the point, but at the same time, filled with emotion. I've learned that sometimes writing about it really can help. :)

[Adora.xo]

It does help a lot :)

[Fuzzy_Poluzah]

Short complicated poems are the ones that you have to read over and over again. I enjoyed this. Noice!

[Adora.xo]

Thank you kindly!

[MoriartyMesa]

Emotion, passion, unresolved feelings, the great underdone is known and is expressed in a manner more civil than most would offer.

[Adora.xo]

I tried :P thank you kindly for the review!

[Ufi Auttorri ~ Amy C. T..]

It's just the summer doldrums... it will pass. Prepare for the next big thing. :)

[Adora.xo]

I think this was an end to something that should've ended with the winter... I think I'm ready for my beginning.

[Dutch Jr.]

Very nice choice of words in this piece. They convey the emotion of a former partner turned stranger quite well.

[Adora.xo]

Thank you very much :)

[Travis Gibson (poetic h..]

Wow... so much emotion in so very few words! I admire that ability!!

[Adora.xo]

Thank you thank you!