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A Poem by Sarah
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i write what i feel. not what i know. and this just spilled out of me. its not very good, but perfection isn't exactly possible.

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My heart pounds; harder than a giant running through a quiet forest. Your very touch touch tingles me from head to toe, never missing an inch. Your love fills my with kindness and hope. Hope that no matter what lies ahead, that I can always feel that pounding of my heart, that touch, and the love you share.

Your smile and that slight twinkle in your pale blue eyes remind me that there is such thing as perfection. I feel alive around you: that together, side by side, we can make the impossible, possible. Your the moon to my night sky and the sun to my blue sky. Without you i am worthless. You lighten up the darkest of times.

© 2010 Sarah


Author's Note

Sarah
Please dont judge. Its not perfect.

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Just a bit of editing. This could be a nice prose poem!

Patrick

Posted 14 Years Ago


I think this is a fine write and only saw a few errors which can be easily fixed if you edit. Good Job; 100/100

Posted 14 Years Ago



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Added on February 9, 2010
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Sarah
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Im quiet, thoughtful, and i dont like expressing myself with an audience. thats why i do it through music, stories, and poetry. more..

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