The Waiting Game

Strange isn’t it?


How this desire 


seems to swallow us whole.



And it’s not quite a sinking sensation


but a shift in gravity 


that fills my soul.



Something is falling. 


Out of place, or out of time


I spent so many years calling


and kept getting the busy line. 



But somehow, your heart

has continued to thrive.


I’d stand before the flames of love


and let it burn us both alive. 



As long as I know that I’m yours.


And you’re mine. 


My dear, my darling,


please, give it time.

Reviews

[maiarusm]

nice imagery. i can almost imagine two characters with this one, speaking of waiting and patience. loved it.

[Sarah Emily]

Oooh, I really enjoyed this one. The rhyme is not forced, so that's a plus. Very well done.

[Serena]

I loved the rhyming in the poem :) not much else to say cuz i really like it ^-^

[MandaBear]

awesome! great write first review in 2013

[XxWhatsername86]

Why thank you very much!! Oh and Happy New Year! :)