ALICE

ALICE

A Poem by XxVampyrCandyXx
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Mad As A Hatter, its Just a Dream

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They press the needles to her skin

She squirms in pain as her blood mixes with Carroll’s ink

They watch with Cheshire grins

As the deadly cocktail opens doors behind doors

A never ending stream in a never ending hall way

With a never ending scream as her mind begins to break

Pretty pictures are painted within the brain

Like sipping tea leaves in ecstasy

Mad as a hatter

She follows the white rabbit

Through bleeding heart halls

Off with her head

She’s better off dead

Poor Alice

It’s just a dream

Or a nightmare it seems

More needles to the skin

More Cheshire grins

Her innocence is taken

Her childhood broken

It’s a never ending wonderland

© 2009 XxVampyrCandyXx


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You are talented with words. How do you know when not to make poems rhyme? And what do you do when making a poem like what's your trick? I hope you answer I because I want to be a good writer like you. Good job!

Posted 14 Years Ago


This poem well it rocks. Good take on alice in wonderland

Posted 14 Years Ago


Very good, I love it. :)

Posted 14 Years Ago


this was awesome like the darkness in this piece ... very creative.... overall a very impressive write .. you should enter it in my lewis carroll contest it be perfect!!!

Posted 15 Years Ago


Wow. Thats amazing. Excellent work.

Posted 15 Years Ago



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Added on June 6, 2009

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XxVampyrCandyXx
XxVampyrCandyXx

Orlando, FL



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Well first things first, My friends call me Mina and Im a pretty easy going individual. I open my mind to new things and ideals. I love to draw, read and write. I can be an impatient person and worst .. more..

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