A ROMANCE

He writes love letters

She smells burned paper

He watched her stand in line for coffee

She walked away

He sings a Song

She drinks the sunshine like cheap wine

He flipped pennies into wishing wells

She made the stars fall

He was blinded by love

Seeing everything she could be but isnt

She sees a shadow

Only

if Only

 he told her he loved her

Reviews

[Jenna]

I like it. You have a very beautiful writing capability. Keep up the writing and Ill keep reading for sure

[Rose Kavanagh]

One word could describe this poem: enchanting! Very lovely work- oh, and have a happy new year! ^_^

[Arthur Crow]

My first read for 2009! And a good one it was.. Each line is beautifully penned, the voice reaches across the sky.... The last line says it all.

Very good work!