TEASE

Do you really think I would make it that easy?

That I would just be sitting here waiting for you?

I believe in working for your meal

So you’ll have to chase me a bit

Before I submit

I have traps placed in certain places

To make it fun and interesting

I have bait you cant resist

Something sweeter than honey and twice as sticky

All you have to do is work for it

Can you see this?

Do you want this?

Are you worthy?

Do you deserve it?

What would you do to prove it?

I’m soft and delicious inside and out

And oh! How I have such a pretty mouth

I don’t know what to do

You’ll have to show me

Do I put it here...or there?

I cant help but touch you

I cant help you touch me

Just stay out of reach

Smell me

See me

Almost taste me

Never touch me

I know where to tug

Stretch and pull

But you’ve been swell

I’ll See you soon

Reviews

[Twilight]

A pretty good write. In this poem, the protagonist wants to trap her potential lover. She seems to be adopting the role of a temptress.

I noticed that there are many references to "me" in this piece. This might be suggesting, that the woman wants the full attention of a potential lover? Furthermore, he needs to meet her expectations. Also, plenty of questions are asked. Clearly, this woman does not "submit" easily to any potential partner. He must prove that he is worthy of her, partly by not falling foul of the "traps" which she has set for him.

"So you'll have to chase me a bit". These words suggests that the protagonist does not expect to put all of the effort into forming a bond with her potential partner. He must do his fair share of the chasing. Presumably, this would help to demonstrate his level of devotion or committment?

"I have bait you cant resist". With this line, the woman is not afraid to express her irresitibility.

"touch", "smell" "see" and "taste" are all included in this poem. They represent most of our senses. And of course, in the heat of passion, all four help to intensify that sensual experience.

Thanks for sharing this with us!

[John A Common]

That was hot,I think I need a cold shower now.