DECEMBER

DECEMBER

A Poem by XxVampyrCandyXx
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I want to feel TRUE romance, never giving lonliness the chance

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Can you tell that I’ve been crying

My soul within slowly dying

Wishing to see the truth between your lies

Wishing to see right through your eyes

What’s the use of holding on

When all we ever had is gone

you deserve much better

Other then these love letters

I’m walking in the cold

Watching my hapless life unfold

The memory of you holds my hand

A feeling I can no longer stand

I want to feel your touch

How can I love you this much

You said you wanted to be friends

That’s something my mind transcends

I’m falling so hard and fast

My mentality surpassed

What did you do

To make me fall so in love with you

I don’t want to give loneliness a chance

I want to feel true romance

Its a battle I will never win

Because Pale September has battled November
And died in Cold December
 

© 2008 XxVampyrCandyXx


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Amazing piece. I especially love the parts near the end. It really brought the whole thing together.
"I don't want to give loneliness a chance
I want to feel true romance
It's a battle I will never win
Because Pale September has battled November
And died in Cold December"
This was an absolutely beautiful piece.
You did an excellent job here.
-E.M.R

Posted 16 Years Ago


i really love this poem. who doesn't want to feel true love? its the best feeling in the world & loneliness one of the worst. i love the imagery of this poem "The memory of you holds my hand A feeling I can no longer stand" & the last lines "Because Pale September has battled November And died in Cold December" are brilliant. good write.

Posted 16 Years Ago



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Added on November 10, 2008

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XxVampyrCandyXx
XxVampyrCandyXx

Orlando, FL



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Well first things first, My friends call me Mina and Im a pretty easy going individual. I open my mind to new things and ideals. I love to draw, read and write. I can be an impatient person and worst .. more..

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