WHY?

WHY?

A Poem by XxVampyrCandyXx
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I know I did Wrong But not the reason

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I see the pain in your eyes

I see the tears go down your cheeks

I see that frown on your lips and

The rise of angry fists

 

Oh why oh why

Did it have to be this way?

I know I did wrong

But not the reason

 

Oh why oh why

Do you get this way

Every time the winds seem to sway?

 

The rain falls and I cry

Cry the tears of my own Red sea

Deep down I want to swear

I hurt but I know you care

 I know you love me

Your just angry

 

Oh why oh why

Did it have to be this way?

I know I did wrong

But not the reason

 

Deep down I want to swear

I hurt but I know you care

 

Please tell me what to do

Lead me to the right

Show me what you want

I see the pain in your eyes

I see the tears go down your cheeks

I see that frown on your lips and

The rise of angry fists

 

 

 

 

© 2008 XxVampyrCandyXx


Author's Note

XxVampyrCandyXx
Another oldie written a couple years back. Not as good as my recent writes...I think.

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I like the imagery of this piece:

I see the pain in your eyes
I see the tears go down your cheeks
I see that frown on your lips and
The rise of angry fists


I also like the repetitive use of "oh why oh why."

Nice work! :)

Posted 16 Years Ago



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XxVampyrCandyXx
XxVampyrCandyXx

Orlando, FL



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Well first things first, My friends call me Mina and Im a pretty easy going individual. I open my mind to new things and ideals. I love to draw, read and write. I can be an impatient person and worst .. more..

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