A WORLD NOT MEANT FOR ME

A WORLD NOT MEANT FOR ME

A Poem by XxVampyrCandyXx
"

This is a world is not meant for me.This world is full of things ill never be

"

 

 

 

I’m tired of the criticism
I’m tired of people making the rules
I’m tired of people telling me what to do

This world is not meant for me
This world is full of things ill never be
This world is not as perfect as it seems
So why do I try.... I’m not that innocent

 

Sex, Drugs, and sodomy, gothic porn stashed on my pc

Frilly dresses isn’t my thing

But death, hate, and catastrophe

 

 Pop singers
Glamour Girls
Pretty people
all are w****s

 

Saints and Bibles
Love for all
Black crosses
dire laws

 

Prostitutes
Angel halls
Red fire
Condom walls

 

This world is not meant for me
This world is full of things ill never be
This world is not as perfect as it seems
So why do I try.... I’m not that innocent

Sex, Drugs, and sodomy, gothic porn stashed on my pc

 Frilly dresses isn’t my thing

 but death, hate, and catastrophe

 

 

 

 

 

© 2008 XxVampyrCandyXx


Author's Note

XxVampyrCandyXx
This was written about 6 years ago. It was a layout for a song I had written.

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Although the writer feels that "This world is full of things ill never be", she also suggests that maybe it isn't worth belonging to anyway? It's a non-conformist poem, perhaps. This piece is also defiant and clearly an assertion of how the writer feels about society today. Whilst pointing out that "this world is not as perfect as it seems", she also brings up the view that she is "not that innocent" either. Perhaps not so innocent as to be fooled into accepting the superficial nature of the modern world? A good poem. Thought-provoking and a great example of self-expression.

Posted 16 Years Ago


i like the darkness & dirtiness of this poem. "Sex, Drugs, and sodomy, gothic porn stashed on my pc Frilly dresses isn't my thing But death, hate, and catastrophe" i especially like this stanza as well as the 3 short stanzas that follow. "This is world is not meant for me" i think this line gets confusing because there are too many 'is's. other than that, i loved it.

Posted 16 Years Ago



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Added on October 25, 2008
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XxVampyrCandyXx
XxVampyrCandyXx

Orlando, FL



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Well first things first, My friends call me Mina and Im a pretty easy going individual. I open my mind to new things and ideals. I love to draw, read and write. I can be an impatient person and worst .. more..

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