ARTIFICIAL

ARTIFICIAL

A Poem by XxVampyrCandyXx
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So its one more day In �Paradise�

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Once upon a dream gone by
I saw myself give in
Every time I closed my eyes
I see what could have been
Nothing hurts
Nothing Bleeds
But my artificial life
But finally when the dream goes by
I forget to fight
To fight a life
That once was mine
Long ago in time
So its one more day
In “Paradise”
One more day
In life
As darkness quickly steals the light
The light within my eyes
And soon be tied by lies
From the never clearing skies
But all I want
 And All I need
Is a reason to survive
To survive the days
The sun may take
My obscured eyes
So its one more day
In “Paradise”
One more day
In this artificial life

© 2008 XxVampyrCandyXx


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very deep piece... love the imagery and flow of this piece.... overall very nicely done!!!!! fav lines....But all I want
And All I need
Is a reason to survive
To survive the days
The sun may take
My obscured eyes
So its one more day
In "Paradise"
One more day
In this artificial life



Posted 16 Years Ago



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Added on September 29, 2008

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XxVampyrCandyXx
XxVampyrCandyXx

Orlando, FL



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Well first things first, My friends call me Mina and Im a pretty easy going individual. I open my mind to new things and ideals. I love to draw, read and write. I can be an impatient person and worst .. more..

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