I HATE YOU

I HATE YOU

A Poem by XxVampyrCandyXx
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The wings they seem to give you Show your emptyness

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I tried to keep it together

Clenching the tiles in tight fists

The tighter I hold the more fragile it gets

The wings they seem to give you

Show your emptyness

I'll never forgive you

Everything you touched went up into flames

I hate you

The values we once had

no longer seem to exist

I tried to keep it together

clenching the tiles in tight fists

The wings they seem to give you

Show your emptyness

Behond the words you always say

The chaotic screams confusing me

I hate you

Behind my mask of pride

Theres nothing really left

Its hard to choose what moon to see

When you rain falls ontop of me

I'll never forgive you

I hate you

I want you to realize the pain I have

For theres no one else to blame

I hate you

© 2008 XxVampyrCandyXx


Author's Note

XxVampyrCandyXx
I wrote this like 6 to 7 years ago as a freashmen in highschool. It might be a little rough around the edges.

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Very angry poem, but I like it. It shows that you really hated someone and in poetry its all about feeling something. Well done!

Posted 16 Years Ago



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Added on September 11, 2008
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XxVampyrCandyXx
XxVampyrCandyXx

Orlando, FL



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Well first things first, My friends call me Mina and Im a pretty easy going individual. I open my mind to new things and ideals. I love to draw, read and write. I can be an impatient person and worst .. more..

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