BE MY VICTIM

BE MY VICTIM

A Poem by XxVampyrCandyXx

 

 

Be my victim

Be my Friend

Be my only till the end

Be My prisoner

Be my slave

Be the blood I forever Crave

Be my Angel

Be my life

Be the soul in which I Knife

Ill build a castle of your fears

to see you drown in your own salty tears

Be My Victim

Be My Bride

Be the one I lock Inside

 

 

 

 

© 2008 XxVampyrCandyXx


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Once again I think this is a good piece. It is nice a lovingly dark, something that I quite enjoy. The rhyme seems natural but could be pumped up with more sophisticated words but it is good. I think all variables here make for a nice enjoyable piece.

Posted 16 Years Ago



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Added on March 28, 2008

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XxVampyrCandyXx
XxVampyrCandyXx

Orlando, FL



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Well first things first, My friends call me Mina and Im a pretty easy going individual. I open my mind to new things and ideals. I love to draw, read and write. I can be an impatient person and worst .. more..

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