"My Skin Is Manmade"

Note: This piece is to be written in an uneducated individual's place.

The sky is a chance and my skin is manmade
A dying religion in need of medical aid
I formed the function of clay with varied masterful pieces
And as I've given you sickness, I will take all your diseases

Grasp your own soul, and let it free to be open
I cherish greed and conceit, and only vow to the broken
Your spirit has risen, and your mind has awoken
And any declaration of faith will remain never spoken

The holy truth is a process designed with incomprehension
I could go faster than I came, but that would be my intention
And so this earthly dimension is but my own mere invention
And resurrection is one thing that no clean soul dares to mention

Your promised day of account will be reckoned in my laugher
So I may show my gratitude to your sadistic hereafter
I will kill your religion and I will mock all your people
I will brainwash your offsprings and I will call myself equal.......

Because I'm uneducated.

Reviews

[Baban.A.A]

I assume this piece from the decietful title to the last word was very interesting. though it was very complex, but I understood the potential meaning lying within the poem. the devine acts of the speaker cann't be known byus humans, I believe the speaker is a human but from a different mind, it is the mind that can do these strange things to people because physically he/she maybe just as human as we are. very interesting indeed and well done.

[Sami Khalil]

A thought provoking piece of great poetry...Thank you for posting...:)