The Prophet (P.B.U.H)

The Prophet (P.B.U.H)

A Poem by Sarah Ahmed

His soul would cringe seeing harm to his people
He was the man who was seen as the finest of equal
He left much behind for all of us to remember
Born in his clan and I've been blessed as a member

Never following deception, but rather was leading
Begging and pleading and always then interceding
Undoubtedly speaking on all his people's behalf
His hands raised to the heavens and his heart broken in half

Fighting for the rights of his dying nation
Asking God to save us and to grant us salvation
Asking God to spare us from eternal damnation
But his ways have been buried and shown no appreciation

To the day he died he would pray day and night
And the tears he cried were of shimmering light
He had dignity and pride and taught all that was right
With a smile to guide every blind in sight

Assuring God to consider any sincerely done deed
Even if it were equal to a small mustard seed
Never would he proceed without providing our need
Then remember without him, we would never succeed

Have we now reached such a point where we've sadly forgotten?
Every blessing we've received and the treatment we've gotten?
He was always in prostration making countless requests
For God to help his people on their journeys and quests

The murder of his blood would be in front of his eyes
Forgiveness to his enemies and mercy to his ties
Without no second thought and without no hesitation
Would he show love to God's most deadliest ungrateful creation

He still remained the man of power after biding farewell
So speak ill of him as you like until you die and dispel
You will never understand the noble man that he was
Because you died to kill him while he lived for us

© 2013 Sarah Ahmed


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Mash'Allah sister very well written in the second to last line of the second to last stanza you should remove the No's as it is a form of double negative to use without and no which would change your intened meaning still very well composed

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Reminds me of a Pilgrim to the new world. A foreign land and a heart of something more than the lord. What makes this more interesting is the times it can fit, Roman, Englishman, or American.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Beautiful poem about a beautiful person. May Allah bless you.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sarah Ahmed

11 Years Ago

Thank you sweetheart, may He bless you too!
The beat and rhyme was very good in this poem! I enjoyed the flow of it. I myself am a Christian and this sort of situation is seen quite a few times in the Old Testament of the Bible!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I like it, it's great, keep it up ;)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sarah Ahmed

11 Years Ago

Thank you! (=

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Added on August 4, 2013
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Sarah Ahmed
Sarah Ahmed

Mississauga, Ontario, Canada



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