Dark Hearted Animal

Dark Hearted Animal

A Poem by Dakota
"

her mind is ferce

"

 

Her blood ran fast,

Her heart powned in her chest,

Her eyes fixed on her pray,

Her thrist was for meat and blood.

 

She is twisted.

Her mind is evil.

She is a killer.

Thrives on blood.

Thrives on the sound of blood dripping.

 

She was about to live another day,

When she set her eyes on him

His heartbeat was pure.

His smile lit her face.

His eyes shone a light.

 

How could she kill him?

He was beautiful in everyway

Her heart said to love him

Her mind says to kill him

 

 

© 2009 Dakota


Author's Note

Dakota
ignore grammer

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EWWWWW TWIGHLIGHT CAN KISS MY BUTT!

and no Werewolf but close enough
You seem cool and i can't spell to save my life Dx

Posted 15 Years Ago


I saw more spelling errors than grammar. You even spelled grammar wrong in Note :D
Sorry, but

anyways, I'm thinking "vampires". Am I right?
The words looked right, it read right, but the flow at parts could be tweaked.

I'm not much of a fan of "vampire" stuff, like New Moon or whatever, but this was a good poem.

Posted 15 Years Ago



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Dakota
Dakota

Newmarket, ON, Canada



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