Poison XXX

i crave for love..

You looked into my cursed eyes,

You not only saw the animal inside,

You saw the eyes of a loney girl,

Broken by socity,

Hurt by men,

 

You saw good,

You looked into her teary eyes and saw she was inscent,

You smiled and her face light with a smile,

 

You took her hand adn promised your heart to her,

She excepted.

Now you love her,

You took her,

You own her,

 

She is your forever.

Hold her close.

Never let go.

She needs you...

 

She just wants to say she loves you <3

Author's Note

ignore my grammer or i will eat you! and i will upload i picture latter

Reviews

[Holly]

You looked into my cursed eyes,

You not only saw the animal inside,

You saw the eyes of a loney girl,

liked this line, then you went from me to her and that really threw me off to ok who are we talking about here? Overall, it was cute, has potential, now back to the drawing boards wit ya, kidding kidding... =)

[Pepsimax]

your grammer is ... only jokin, i loved it, very emotional and it would make a good love story. Excellent.