Without
A Poem by
Dakota
Well another sappy love poem
Without me.. .
I'm alone.
Without music...
I'm dead.
Without dreams...
I'm nothing.
Without love...
I'm a blank page.
Without a knive...
I'm happy.
Without the dark...
I'm seen.
Without happiness...
I'm gone.
Without a kiss...
I'm forgotten.
Without you...
I'd rather die.
But i have you know...
© 2009 Dakota
Author's Note
gotta love 12 am poems xD
Reviews
I can't even pick a favorite line, because all of it is amazing
Posted 15 Years Ago
Without love...
I'm a blank page.
Love these words,
This is very well written and very creative
Enjoyable read.
Posted 15 Years Ago
Without love...
I'm a blank page.
Love these words,
This is very well written and very creative
Enjoyable read.
A few things could be swapped around, but overall, this is really REALLY terrific. @@
Posted 15 Years Ago
A few things could be swapped around, but overall, this is really REALLY terrific. @@
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Added on November 10, 2009
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Dakota Newmarket, ON, Canada
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I right according to my fellings and moods. I'm Random xD Okay today I just found out I have an ego. Oh great. I have had a bad childhood and have exparemented on my emostions with diffrent things lik..
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