Without

Without

A Poem by Dakota
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Well another sappy love poem

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Without me...

I'm alone.

Without music...

I'm dead.

Without dreams...

I'm nothing.

Without love...

I'm a blank page.

Without a knive...

I'm happy.

Without the dark...

I'm seen.

Without happiness...

I'm gone.

Without a kiss...

I'm forgotten.

Without you...

I'd rather die.

But i have you know...

© 2009 Dakota


Author's Note

Dakota
gotta love 12 am poems xD

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I can't even pick a favorite line, because all of it is amazing

Posted 15 Years Ago


Without love...
I'm a blank page.

Love these words,
This is very well written and very creative
Enjoyable read.

Posted 15 Years Ago


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A few things could be swapped around, but overall, this is really REALLY terrific. @@

Posted 15 Years Ago



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Added on November 10, 2009

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Dakota
Dakota

Newmarket, ON, Canada



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