No Mercy

No Mercy

A Poem by Dakota
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I was sitting in my rooma and started makingmarks across my paper and realized they were words xD

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Have mercy one me!

You taunt me with your perfect smile,

Your laugh,

Your words,

Your knowledge,

Your kisses.

You leave me wanting more,

Craving you,

Dying to be with you,

I was once hurt by pain,

Neglect,

Trust,

Friends.

You took that all away.

Your amazing,

Heplful,

Loving,

Caring.

And your all mine.

So please have mercy!

© 2009 Dakota


Author's Note

Dakota
remember i randomly wrote this

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This is wonderful and so sincere
One amazing lovely write!

Posted 15 Years Ago


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I loved this! It was a little choppy 'round the edges in places, but everyone's writing is so...

Ah, I'm rambling again. Anyways, very VERY nice. :D

I love you.

Posted 15 Years Ago


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Added on November 10, 2009

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Dakota
Dakota

Newmarket, ON, Canada



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